Dalliance….

snowball

Mosquitoes humming
in the humid haze

still air
no breeze to sway the
arms of the ancient oak
that shelters us from
the scorching sun

Spanish moss dangling
like strips of grey lace

We pair
retreating to this
shady rest, away from
the green lawns and the
shouts of children having fun

White styrfoam cup
sticky hands and face

Together share
our snoball treat
trading mouthfuls
of shaved ice and sweet syrup
with spoon or with tongues

Summertime in N’awlins
like a sweet happy song
And I’ll catch that drop of nectar
that ran down your neck, to your collar-bone, before long…..

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47 Responses to Dalliance….

  1. Emily says:

    Oh, so hot, so sweet, so dreamy…sigh… ❀

  2. VictoryInTrouble says:

    Oh, Eric, this is gorgeous! A sweet stolen moment with your love. The last part is perfect!

  3. maharedwynn says:

    Yum! Lovely and sweet!

  4. Rita says:

    Absolute temptation, my Brother. Looks marvelous. Sounds better.

  5. Sweet, sultry Southern goodness

  6. Oh the collarbone, drip… Come on, Eric, you know you’re killing us! ❀️😍❀️

  7. Eric, do you have an infatuation with the collarbone?…way to leave your readers in suspense! Not knowing what will come next, keeps them coming back for more! πŸ˜‰ snoballs that is… Lol!

  8. jrd1974 says:

    What thirsty and lusty moment – and such raw expression. When your ‘metaphor’ crosses into action I could not help but to imagine including myself. Neat!

  9. This is a treat for the senses. Your poem saves me from experiencing the sticky summer of New Orleans, but now I want a sno-cone πŸ™‚

  10. Elizabeth Helmich says:

    Damn…somehow you even make humidity sound great all of a sudden. Ah. Yummy.

  11. moonskittles says:

    Oh my.. such a thrilling piece. Passionate and worth a dalliance πŸ˜‰
    ❀ Dajena

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